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|||Bar||Code|||

Mon Dec 29, 2008, 8:34 AM
ok, since I've had a few people request that I tell them what my manga idea, |||Bar||Code||| is about, I decided to put it on here.
here's the summary:

In the future, women and girls alike have been swallowed back into discrimination as weak, pathetic toys for men. No longer do they roam free. All a woman needs to do to get out from her cage is have a man buy her – but they would still be trapped otherwise.
Branded by bar codes, women can be bought or sold buy men and used as how the men find it pleasing. Women can’t even do anything without their master’s consent!
Kiyoki, a trapped 18-year-old girl, longs to have this now almost impossible moral birthright called freedom. When one day when she is bought by a man, she feels she’s halfway to her freedom; only to end up being mistreated by him one day – and to be saved by a mysterious boy! Will this boy be the one to help her reach her dream, or treat her just as other women are treated by men?

Main Characters:
Kiyoki ~ [link]

Ryou ~ [link] [link]

please tell me what you think! ^-^

and PLEASE DON'T CLAIM my idea or COPY it. I'd like to actually try to make my first and very own manga without people stealing my main story idea.

  • Mood: Artistic
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  • Playing: nothing
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:iconsakizm:
Ah! This really sounds interesting! I can't wait to read it! :D

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My mommy calls me her 'Sunshine'. <3
:iconanimeheroine:
really? thanks! :D

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die and get a life

THAT, dear Lala, is what I call a door. DUH.
:iconsakizm:
Yes, really. xD
Not a problem!

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My mommy calls me her 'Sunshine'. <3
:iconanimeheroine:
^-^ :hug:

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die and get a life

THAT, dear Lala, is what I call a door. DUH.
:iconprincesssnowman:
I does sound intersting :w00t:

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Bad Spelers Unte
:iconanimeheroine:
thanks! ^^

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die and get a life

THAT, dear Lala, is what I call a door. DUH.
:icontopekachu:
It's a good concept, but I don't think it's all that original yet. The "mysterious boy" is a cliche used in many manga. You might want to stray away from that.

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Who would've guessed that everyone in school was a professional dancer?
:iconanimeheroine:
ah, ok. I only use that "mysterious boy" concept to describe him when he first appears though. otherwise, I wouldn't know how else to describe him when I don't want to give away his name just yet, lol. but thanks for pointing it out, along with the whole "originality" thing. I'm doing my best to make it as original as possible =)

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die and get a life

THAT, dear Lala, is what I call a door. DUH.
:icontopekachu:
Like I said, it's a neat concept. Kind of like Chobits, in a way. You might wanna brush up on your action poses, too. You can never have too much movement :dummy:

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Who would've guessed that everyone in school was a professional dancer?

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