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BarCode - Kiyoki by ~AnimeHeroine:iconAnimeHeroine:

Categories Digital Art > Drawings > Fantasy

©2008-2009 ~AnimeHeroine
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HA! NOW it shows up! sorry folks, when I tried getting this on DA the first time, it was being stupid and showing nothing but black. but thanks to my friend (who admits she didn't know what she was doing), I'm now able to put it on! =D

ok, first of all, |||Bar||Code||| is a new manga I'm planning on making. right now, I'm working on the story format, etc.
but I was also a bit bored and I wanted to see what the main character, Kiyoki would look like when I draw her for the manga. her hair style may change, maybe. I might just keep it the way it is.

and I plan making a pic of the main guy -- Ryou -- too, sooner or later (hopefully before Christmas Break ends).

and if anyone wants more info on |||Bar||Code||| and what it's about, just post me a comment or message, 'cause I don't want to bore you explaining it on here =D
the only downside is, you won't be able to see the future manga unless I'm able to use my mom's digital camera.

time: about two hours
used: GIMP 2

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~White-pine Dec 28, 2008, 6:02:58 PM
Ooh, this looks very pretty. :) I like her eyes and her hair.
I do see a few things you could improve on though (I hope you don't mind if I give a few crits! ^__^). For instance, there is no lineart anywhere but on her skin. This will make it look slightly uneven. Try linearting the whole thing then coloring underneath, it makes it a lot cleaner and smoother looking! Also, the anatomy is off, her shoulder looks too small and her chin is a bit too long. :) I hope I was helpful!
I'd like to hear more about your manga idea! It seems like it'd be interesting. :heart:
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~AnimeHeroine Dec 28, 2008, 6:15:45 PM
lol, ok, thanks! ^^ (for the crits too.) and I think I'll either post more info about my manga idea either on the next pic with the main guy charrie or on my journal thingy.
I'd probably do a bit better if I wasn't using a mouse ^^; in fact, I know I do better using an actual pencil. lol, oh well, just have to use what I got and do what I can. as for the lineart on her skin, I wanted to color it over, but I was lazy, lol. and for the anatomy, thanks about that too. I don't do the usual stick figure/mannequin thing first when it comes to drawing with a mouse/on the computer, so I'd obviously need to be as precise as possible. especially with the head.... and the hand, I didn't like how the hand came out. XD so thanks for giving me that crit. now I know that I need to be more careful.
anyways, thanks so much!

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die and get a life

THAT, dear Lala, is what I call a door. DUH.
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~Sakizm Dec 28, 2008, 7:09:45 PM
Very pretty! Love her eyes...:heart:
I'd let you use my scaner for your manga...but we live too far away. D: Darn it.
Your manga idea seems really interesting and I'd love too read/hear about it. :D

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My mommy calls me her 'Sunshine'. <3
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~AnimeHeroine Dec 28, 2008, 8:35:18 PM
thanks! ^-^
aww... yeah, if I still lived over there, I'd be going to your house every weekend to use it and see you XD
heehee, ok! then I'll be sure to copy and paste the summary on either the next pic or my journal ^^ (whichever is fastest and whichever everyone prefers. I'll probably go for the journal though)

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die and get a life

THAT, dear Lala, is what I call a door. DUH.
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~Sakizm Dec 28, 2008, 9:08:55 PM
Yay!!
...gosh, we haven't had a sleepover in like 5 years...O_o Holy crud.
I remember that time you and Kaitie slept over at my house when Andrew was born and Hershey ran away that morning and came back skunk-fied. :XD: We pet her and then said, 'EEEEWWWWW! What's that SMEEEELLL!?' :rofl:

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My mommy calls me her 'Sunshine'. <3
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~AnimeHeroine Dec 29, 2008, 8:12:26 AM
^^
I know, seriously! I miss having sleepovers like.. literally almost every weekend XD
ROFL!!! I remember that!!! that was really funny. but I'm sure Hershey learned her lesson with skunks. rofl

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die and get a life

THAT, dear Lala, is what I call a door. DUH.
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~Sakizm Dec 29, 2008, 10:05:48 AM
That's true. xD But it's rare to have sleepovers here now...D:
Everyone is like, "married" now. They work, have gf/bf or are too grown-up and consider sleepovers a thing of the past. D:
Whaaaa, I miss being 12. It was easier. xD
Sort of. xD Whenever I smell skunk, I call Hershey inside immediately before she finds out.

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My mommy calls me her 'Sunshine'. <3
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~AnimeHeroine Dec 29, 2008, 10:11:38 AM
aw, really? :( same here...
lol, yeah. I still have sleepovers with my friends when they're not busy. but hey, I don't work yet, nor have a bf, and even though I'm mature for my age, I still love to have sleepovers! so if we even see each other sooner or later, we;'d be able to sleep over as much as we want! XD
yeah, 12... that was before I moved too, so that'd be better too! ^^ lol
XD nice.
oh, btw, I put up a journal about |||Bar||Code|||, so go check it out if you want! ^^

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die and get a life

THAT, dear Lala, is what I call a door. DUH.
:iconsakizm:
~Sakizm Dec 29, 2008, 10:16:25 AM
I don't work yet either or have a bf but even though I'm 'old' (as my cousins call me x'D) I still LOVE sleepovers!
Yay!!!! Future sleepovers!
I already checked it out. :D

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My mommy calls me her 'Sunshine'. <3
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